Success Over Failure

Here one of those lines you sit and think damn most of the lines hes spit are real, well i wanted to give my lyrical abilities abit more broad fire.... get it or should i demonstrate?

Is working for the excessive needs out of the question?
Nepotism when most creeps get in the industry in an exception
Rappers nowadays spit fake lines to deliver deception
Only truth in ma verses, bet I’d pass the honesty test with exemption
I’m getting better instead of saying I’m having it all
Them imaginary status collapse along when they fall
Because of that i never really show off how tall
Haters say its wack but do lovers care?
I get better with every challenge, so please dare
Not familiar with native Lang dope words, lets be fair
The outcome jealousy leads to discriminate
The main hope to terminate then cremate
Even if you succeed I’ll rise from my ashes like phoenix
Now you bout to sell me lame words with addition of false suffix
Wish i was a freestyler, so I’d win battles
Funny how most guys at ma age would poppin' bubbles while I’d be poppin' bottles
Quickly Indulged unto rap game, by utilization of charisma
Handed ‘em haters Something to judge, enhance fake criticism
Bow before this wit enthusiasm, compared to christinism
Make use of me before i proclaim communism
Soft niggas a never real, saw one doing his baby mama manicure
I know success comes to us each like we're in queue
But Moment by moment a bright mc trips to ridicule then melts into use-to-be statue
Then I'd be invited for a hit with ‘em fallout artists to their rescue
I will wont leave with my last hope clue.

Kronic Wonder

This written verse was copied from my line while responding to lines of  Kagisho"Kronic" Shai  (of the D.OX Group)'s reply freestyle on his status on Facebook. This follows the previous post i posted earlier read the following and tell me what you think. 

Complement on ya rap, the shit expressive
I never expanded, guess it makes me impressive
I’m only a writer; I call da shit such as yours expensive
My space is flexible to any shape, highly defensive
I ball very hard, please officer charge ma for being offensive
Still spitin' da hottest breeze you could hardly defuse
Ain’t got work out ma swag, da shit is difficult to refuse
Ain’t gota crew, I bet we could explode if we fuse
Few years ago met with da black D.OX Kronic wonder himself, then had a plan
We talked about gangstarizm and how success is yet to come
He said hez known locally 4hiz debut release but made me mad and wana be
Now I’m dreamin’ higher than nigas’ at ma age cud ever be
If u ain’t got plans take all ya cash and invest in ma, coz later I ‘ma be at benefits.

Embodied Party

Do you know one of those days when you're just going with everybody then end up being in front of them all? when i was just doing my freestyle to one of my homies' status on facebook then ended up writiing something I'm proud of. here read and throw your comments.

The route's clear and ma nigga I’m so flawn
Construction in da works, grass chopper peckerin' her lawn
Rude at what I do, think I deserve da virtue crown
Call me floppy nerd, but I party than your whole crew
Steal da show quick, ‘em nigas say I’m fame crock
Mixin' sum real purple shit, call me "lean" cook
Smok't ma crack all night in da deck pack
My night was bad, and da chick was black
How'd i get wasted, and then returned back?
All money teeth rot, blame ma swag plaque
I do this for my ville, you know its D.Ox
Leme be faded in da xo, you keep your detox
No longa shop, numba1 customer at da kiosk